Once we finish up your project, I'd love to hear back from you with comments about how you feel about our final draft as well as us working together. But this is completely optional. With your permission I will post your job and comments here.
BOOK BASED ON MY MOTHER'S LIFE
CLIENT
Catherine Makhanu
August 4th, 2015
JOB DETAILS:
I am looking for someone that has experience as a Ghost Writer for a Biography.
They should be to able write a Biography of someone that has passed on. Be able to tell a story and write in a way that will make people want to read the book. Ask the right questions to fill in the gaps, and research where necessary.
Be able to write and edit
Some knowledge in book publishing process is helpful.
Include what your salary requirements are to complete this kind of project.
The timeline you are able to complete the project.
CLIENT FEEDBACK:
Joe has been professional and great to work with. He is also very knowledgeable in the subject and flexible with timelines, produces work that is of high quality.. I highly recommend him to anyone.
Catherine Makhanu
BOOK BASED ON A TRUE STORY
Client
tjtheone
July 7, 2015
Job Details
I have an amazing true story to tell. I was referred to your service by a producer you wrote a screenplay for. I would be willing to share credit on the book for a reduction in the price. This story deals with some high level officials, people in the movie industry and some major sports figures. My budget is only $7,500.00 and I would like to break that up into payments.
Thank you in advance.
Feedback Comments
"This was all new to me. I was referred to Joe by a close friend and I'm so glad that I was. Working with him has been a dream come true especially with some very sensitive info we have discussed. We've already got a publisher who wants to publish the book. Thank you so much for all your hard work and time Joe. I would recommend his services with no hesitation at all. After reading the finished book my producer friend is not talking about having a screenplay written so it looks like I'll still be working with you on another project.- Mike Bishop
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SCREENPLAY
Client:
sentinalzk 1
June 12, 2015
Job Details
Would love help writing an amazing screen play about the final few days before the Dec. of Independence was written. So much more than we may have learned or perceived was going on during that time and to think that these people did more for us, by creating something new.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe was a pleasure to work with. Truly a professional, responsive, insightful, and willing to push the envelope of our project to exceed my own expectations. I am looking forward to working again with Joe soon. Thanks!” — Client
tjtheone
July 7, 2015
Job Details
I have an amazing true story to tell. I was referred to your service by a producer you wrote a screenplay for. I would be willing to share credit on the book for a reduction in the price. This story deals with some high level officials, people in the movie industry and some major sports figures. My budget is only $7,500.00 and I would like to break that up into payments.
Thank you in advance.
Feedback Comments
"This was all new to me. I was referred to Joe by a close friend and I'm so glad that I was. Working with him has been a dream come true especially with some very sensitive info we have discussed. We've already got a publisher who wants to publish the book. Thank you so much for all your hard work and time Joe. I would recommend his services with no hesitation at all. After reading the finished book my producer friend is not talking about having a screenplay written so it looks like I'll still be working with you on another project.- Mike Bishop
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SCREENPLAY
Client:
sentinalzk 1
June 12, 2015
Job Details
Would love help writing an amazing screen play about the final few days before the Dec. of Independence was written. So much more than we may have learned or perceived was going on during that time and to think that these people did more for us, by creating something new.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe was a pleasure to work with. Truly a professional, responsive, insightful, and willing to push the envelope of our project to exceed my own expectations. I am looking forward to working again with Joe soon. Thanks!” — Client
BOOK BASED ON A TRUE STORY
Client:
pmhanssen
May 12, 2015
Job Details
I am looking for a good "Christian" Ghost Writer who has an understanding of scriptural principles to help me write my life story.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe was great to work with. He was very encouraging and always there to offer input and advice. I highly recommend him and his work.” - CLIENT
Client:
pmhanssen
May 12, 2015
Job Details
I am looking for a good "Christian" Ghost Writer who has an understanding of scriptural principles to help me write my life story.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe was great to work with. He was very encouraging and always there to offer input and advice. I highly recommend him and his work.” - CLIENT
BOOK BASED ON A TRUE STORY
BOOKB
Client: teetime305 mARCH March 27, 2015
Job Details
I need a ghost writer to write my story. A story like no other . My story is very similar to the Amanda Knox story . I believe mine is far more interesting and in 2012 was the cover story in Miami new times magazine. it was there number one story of the year. my story is not only true but one of a kind. It has sex violence Russian and Italian mafia , corruption , drugs and human trafficking. it also has two years of prison time in one of the worst prison in central and south America Google my name tony galeota and you can read the articles .
Feedback Comments:
“Joe was very professional and knowledgeable . He has a lot of experience in writing books , and gave me some really good ideas and direction. I would highly recommend him to anyone who needs a ghost writer.” — teetime305
BOOKB
Client: teetime305 mARCH March 27, 2015
Job Details
I need a ghost writer to write my story. A story like no other . My story is very similar to the Amanda Knox story . I believe mine is far more interesting and in 2012 was the cover story in Miami new times magazine. it was there number one story of the year. my story is not only true but one of a kind. It has sex violence Russian and Italian mafia , corruption , drugs and human trafficking. it also has two years of prison time in one of the worst prison in central and south America Google my name tony galeota and you can read the articles .
Feedback Comments:
“Joe was very professional and knowledgeable . He has a lot of experience in writing books , and gave me some really good ideas and direction. I would highly recommend him to anyone who needs a ghost writer.” — teetime305
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NOVEL - BASED ON A TRUE STORY
Client:
jeffreyweisman
Jan 19, 2015
Job Details
The story involves a physician who tries to be a businessman and gets a lot more than he bargained for. Mystery, intrigue, crime, public company CEO and a big payoff! Skills: article writing, creative writing, ghostwriting
Feedback Comments:
“Very good collaboration with this author. I hope to work together with him on the screenplay and on my next book.” — jeffreyweisman
NOVEL - BASED ON A TRUE STORY
Client:
jeffreyweisman
Jan 19, 2015
Job Details
The story involves a physician who tries to be a businessman and gets a lot more than he bargained for. Mystery, intrigue, crime, public company CEO and a big payoff! Skills: article writing, creative writing, ghostwriting
Feedback Comments:
“Very good collaboration with this author. I hope to work together with him on the screenplay and on my next book.” — jeffreyweisman
Client: tieman55 (3 other reviews completed) May 30, 2014|$7,500|Creative Writing|Completed| Job Details Biblical Based / books / screen plays a collaboration
I am a Christian, I believe in open theism. Very very few, novels / screen plays are ever written based on a open theistic world view.
I am an expert on open theism and I believe that novels and or movies would be blockbuster hits if they were written as an open theist would interpret histo...rical events ............ and the best stories ever told are in the Bible.
There are so many good stories in the Bible , they just need to be told in the correct way , which is through the Prism of open theism.
This would be a collaborative endeavor.
I will be the editor and to a lessor extent the director of events. I would use
the criteria below as my guide to editing.
1. The major events in the historical writings must be fairly accurate.
2. Stay away from any form of Christian heresy.
3. The story must be believable.
I will ensure that the work is a true and believable history of what did happen. And you are to make it a relate-able, adventurous and at times humorous.
Just off the top of my head, I have three Biblical Stories, that everyone knows, but that have never ever really been told and that would be blockbuster hits. One of the stories, that I would want to start out on, really sticks out because it would fit right into a vacant spot of a popular authors series of works, so that is where we would start.
I am not a writer, When I write, it tends to jump around too much and then I forget where I am at and I have to read the whole
chapter again to find my place , it is exhausting and I just can't do it.
So, I need a partner, I would pay an upfront fee to write the first book and or screenplay and you would retain 50 percent of the royalties.
I will leave you with an example of where this will take us ................... the blockbuster movie Bruce Almighty, while not a Biblical story, it is told with a close to acceptable open theistic world view and that is why it was so very popular. Take the same world view, that was present in that movie and put it into a real historical Biblical event and you have a got a big big hit!
Thanks, Mike Skills: content writing, creative writing, english, publishing fundamentals, screenwritingView Full Job Description »Collapse Job Description »Feedback Comments: “Thanks Joe, You taught me a lot. It was fun working with you and your insight was very helpful. I am very happy with the finished product ! ” — tieman55
SCREENPLAY - FICTION
Client:
tieman55 May 30, 2014
Job Details
I am a Christian, I believe in open theism. Very very few, novels / screen plays are ever written based on a open theistic world view. I am an expert on open theism and I believe that novels and or movies would be blockbuster hits if they were written as an open theist would interpret historical events and the best stories ever told are in the Bible. There are so many good stories in the Bible , they just need to be told in the correct way , which is through the Prism of open theism.
1. The major events in the historical writings must be fairly accurate.
2. Stay away from any form of Christian heresy.
3. The story must be believable.
I am not a writer, When I write, it tends to jump around too much and then I forget where I am at and I have to read the whole chapter again to find my place , it is exhausting and I just can't do it. So, I need a partner, I would pay an upfront fee to write the first book and or screenplay and you would retain 50 percent of the royalties. I will leave you with an example of where this will take us ... the blockbuster movie Bruce Almighty, while not a Biblical story, it is told with a close to acceptable open theistic world view and that is why it was so very popular. Take the same world view, that was present in that movie and put it into a real historical Biblical event and you have a got a big big hit!
Thanks, Mike
Feedback Comments:
Thanks Joe, You taught me a lot. It was fun working with you and your insight was very helpful. I am very happy with the finished product ! ” — tieman55 f tt
I am a Christian, I believe in open theism. Very very few, novels / screen plays are ever written based on a open theistic world view.
I am an expert on open theism and I believe that novels and or movies would be blockbuster hits if they were written as an open theist would interpret histo...rical events ............ and the best stories ever told are in the Bible.
There are so many good stories in the Bible , they just need to be told in the correct way , which is through the Prism of open theism.
This would be a collaborative endeavor.
I will be the editor and to a lessor extent the director of events. I would use
the criteria below as my guide to editing.
1. The major events in the historical writings must be fairly accurate.
2. Stay away from any form of Christian heresy.
3. The story must be believable.
I will ensure that the work is a true and believable history of what did happen. And you are to make it a relate-able, adventurous and at times humorous.
Just off the top of my head, I have three Biblical Stories, that everyone knows, but that have never ever really been told and that would be blockbuster hits. One of the stories, that I would want to start out on, really sticks out because it would fit right into a vacant spot of a popular authors series of works, so that is where we would start.
I am not a writer, When I write, it tends to jump around too much and then I forget where I am at and I have to read the whole
chapter again to find my place , it is exhausting and I just can't do it.
So, I need a partner, I would pay an upfront fee to write the first book and or screenplay and you would retain 50 percent of the royalties.
I will leave you with an example of where this will take us ................... the blockbuster movie Bruce Almighty, while not a Biblical story, it is told with a close to acceptable open theistic world view and that is why it was so very popular. Take the same world view, that was present in that movie and put it into a real historical Biblical event and you have a got a big big hit!
Thanks, Mike Skills: content writing, creative writing, english, publishing fundamentals, screenwritingView Full Job Description »Collapse Job Description »Feedback Comments: “Thanks Joe, You taught me a lot. It was fun working with you and your insight was very helpful. I am very happy with the finished product ! ” — tieman55
SCREENPLAY - FICTION
Client:
tieman55 May 30, 2014
Job Details
I am a Christian, I believe in open theism. Very very few, novels / screen plays are ever written based on a open theistic world view. I am an expert on open theism and I believe that novels and or movies would be blockbuster hits if they were written as an open theist would interpret historical events and the best stories ever told are in the Bible. There are so many good stories in the Bible , they just need to be told in the correct way , which is through the Prism of open theism.
1. The major events in the historical writings must be fairly accurate.
2. Stay away from any form of Christian heresy.
3. The story must be believable.
I am not a writer, When I write, it tends to jump around too much and then I forget where I am at and I have to read the whole chapter again to find my place , it is exhausting and I just can't do it. So, I need a partner, I would pay an upfront fee to write the first book and or screenplay and you would retain 50 percent of the royalties. I will leave you with an example of where this will take us ... the blockbuster movie Bruce Almighty, while not a Biblical story, it is told with a close to acceptable open theistic world view and that is why it was so very popular. Take the same world view, that was present in that movie and put it into a real historical Biblical event and you have a got a big big hit!
Thanks, Mike
Feedback Comments:
Thanks Joe, You taught me a lot. It was fun working with you and your insight was very helpful. I am very happy with the finished product ! ” — tieman55 f tt
Client: tigerfire57 Apr 6, 2014|$2,500|Ghost Writing|Completed| Job Details Looking for funny writers to format and finish a treatment and pilot episode for a sitcom based in the retail/fashion industry, set in Las Vegas. It's intended to be single camera doc/mock with some characters occasionally talking to the camera when they have a wisecrack to make. Intended for Network Broadcast.
I feel that it is the most promis...ing work I have at this time. I would like to see a fairly well polished treatment, and a pilot episode. My synopsis has a lot of very vivid character descriptions, and a lot of potential comedic situations to build upon. My synopsis is just over 3,200 words, and this is due in part to the extensive amount of potential "situations". I also have photos of what I think that the characters and settings should/could look like (in my mind), to help me communicate my vision.
The pilot episode should contain witty dialogue, and I am looking for a writer that does indeed have TV sitcom or other comedy writing experience.
It is my hope that the perfect writer will submit me a fine bid for this sitcom concept (please submit job bids rather than hourly bids), and it is my hope that the writer will find inspiration in my own writings so that together we may find success in this collaboration.
I did receive a number of good bids when I first posted, but I think that I may not have been specific enough in what I originally posted. So if you previously bid, please do try again with a clearer understanding of my more specific parameters. Skills: creative writing, ghostwriting, screenwriting, script writingView Full Job Description »Collapse Job Description »Feedback Comments: “If you were to look up the word PROFESSIONAL in the dictionary, it would say: "see Joe Vetromile". Joe is experienced, knowledgeable, and sticks to his timelines.” — tigerfire57 Client: tigerfire57 Apr 6, 2014|$2,500|Ghost Writing|Completed| Job Details Looking for funny writers to format and finish a treatment and pilot episode for a sitcom based in the retail/fashion industry, set in Las Vegas. It's intended to be single camera doc/mock with some characters occasionally talking to the camera when they have a wisecrack to make. Intended for Network Broadcast.
I feel that it is the most promis...ing work I have at this time. I would like to see a fairly well polished treatment, and a pilot episode. My synopsis has a lot of very vivid character descriptions, and a lot of potential comedic situations to build upon. My synopsis is just over 3,200 words, and this is due in part to the extensive amount of potential "situations". I also have photos of what I think that the characters and settings should/could look like (in my mind), to help me communicate my vision.
The pilot episode should contain witty dialogue, and I am looking for a writer that does indeed have TV sitcom or other comedy writing experience.
It is my hope that the perfect writer will submit me a fine bid for this sitcom concept (please submit job bids rather than hourly bids), and it is my hope that the writer will find inspiration in my own writings so that together we may find success in this collaboration.
I did receive a number of good bids when I first posted, but I think that I may not have been specific enough in what I originally posted. So if you previously bid, please do try again with a clearer understanding of my more specific parameters. Skills: creative writing, ghostwriting, screenwriting, script writingView Full Job Description »Collapse Job Description »Feedback Comments: “If you were to look up the word PROFESSIONAL in the dictionary, it would say: "see Joe Vetromile". Joe is experienced, knowledgeable, and sticks to his timelines.” — tigerfire57 Client: tigerfire57 Apr 6, 2014|$2,500|Ghost Writing|Completed| Job Details Looking for funny writers to format and finish a treatment and pilot episode for a sitcom based in the retail/fashion industry, set in Las Vegas. It's intended to be single camera doc/mock with some characters occasionally talking to the camera when they have a wisecrack to make. Intended for Network Broadcast.
I feel that it is the most promis...ing work I have at this time. I would like to see a fairly well polished treatment, and a pilot episode. My synopsis has a lot of very vivid character descriptions, and a lot of potential comedic situations to build upon. My synopsis is just over 3,200 words, and this is due in part to the extensive amount of potential "situations". I also have photos of what I think that the characters and settings should/could look like (in my mind), to help me communicate my vision.
The pilot episode should contain witty dialogue, and I am looking for a writer that does indeed have TV sitcom or other comedy writing experience.
It is my hope that the perfect writer will submit me a fine bid for this sitcom concept (please submit job bids rather than hourly bids), and it is my hope that the writer will find inspiration in my own writings so that together we may find success in this collaboration.
I did receive a number of good bids when I first posted, but I think that I may not have been specific enough in what I originally posted. So if you previously bid, please do try again with a clearer understanding of my more specific parameters. Skills: creative writing, ghostwriting, screenwriting, script writingView Full Job Description »Collapse Job Description »Feedback Comments: “If you were to look up the word PROFESSIONAL in the dictionary, it would say: "see Joe Vetromile". Joe is experienced, knowledgeable, and sticks to his timelines.” — tigerfire57 hhhhClient: tigerfire57 Apr 6, 2014|$2,500|Ghost Writing|Completed| Job Details Looking for funny writers to format and finish a treatment and pilot episode for a sitcom based in the retail/fashion industry, set in Las Vegas. It's intended to be single camera doc/mock with some characters occasionally talking to the camera when they have a wisecrack to make. Intended for Network Broadcast.
I feel that it is the most promis...ing work I have at this time. I would like to see a fairly well polished treatment, and a pilot episode. My synopsis has a lot of very vivid character descriptions, and a lot of potential comedic situations to build upon. My synopsis is just over 3,200 words, and this is due in part to the extensive amount of potential "situations". I also have photos of what I think that the characters and settings should/could look like (in my mind), to help me communicate my vision.
The pilot episode should contain witty dialogue, and I am looking for a writer that does indeed have TV sitcom or other comedy writing experience.
It is my hope that the perfect writer will submit me a fine bid for this sitcom concept (please submit job bids rather than hourly bids), and it is my hope that the writer will find inspiration in my own writings so that together we may find success in this collaboration.
I did receive a number of good bids when I first posted, but I think that I may not have been specific enough in what I originally posted. So if you previously bid, please do try again with a clearer understanding of my more specific parameters. Skills: creative writing, ghostwriting, screenwriting, script writingView Full Job Description »Collapse Job Description »Feedback Comments: “If you were to look up the word PROFESSIONAL in the dictionary, it would say: "see Joe Vetromile". Joe is experienced, knowledgeable, and sticks to his timelines.” — tigerfire57
TREATMENT AND PILOT FOR TELEVISION
Client:
tigerfire57
Apr 6, 2014
Job Details
Looking for a treatment and pilot episode for a sitcom based in the retail/fashion industry, set in Las Vegas. It's intended to be single camera doc/mock with some characters occasionally talking to the camera when they have a wisecrack to make. Intended for Network Broadcast. I would like to see a fairly well polished treatment, and a pilot episode. My synopsis has a lot of very vivid character descriptions, and a lot of potential comedic situations to build upon. My synopsis is just over 3,200 words, and this is due in part to the extensive amount of potential "situations". I also have photos of what I think that the characters and settings should/could look like (in my mind), to help me communicate my vision.
The pilot episode should contain witty dialogue.
Feedback Comments:
“If you were to look up the word PROFESSIONAL in the dictionary, it would say: "see Joe Vetromile". Joe is experienced, knowledgeable, and sticks to his timelines.” — tigerfire57
I feel that it is the most promis...ing work I have at this time. I would like to see a fairly well polished treatment, and a pilot episode. My synopsis has a lot of very vivid character descriptions, and a lot of potential comedic situations to build upon. My synopsis is just over 3,200 words, and this is due in part to the extensive amount of potential "situations". I also have photos of what I think that the characters and settings should/could look like (in my mind), to help me communicate my vision.
The pilot episode should contain witty dialogue, and I am looking for a writer that does indeed have TV sitcom or other comedy writing experience.
It is my hope that the perfect writer will submit me a fine bid for this sitcom concept (please submit job bids rather than hourly bids), and it is my hope that the writer will find inspiration in my own writings so that together we may find success in this collaboration.
I did receive a number of good bids when I first posted, but I think that I may not have been specific enough in what I originally posted. So if you previously bid, please do try again with a clearer understanding of my more specific parameters. Skills: creative writing, ghostwriting, screenwriting, script writingView Full Job Description »Collapse Job Description »Feedback Comments: “If you were to look up the word PROFESSIONAL in the dictionary, it would say: "see Joe Vetromile". Joe is experienced, knowledgeable, and sticks to his timelines.” — tigerfire57 Client: tigerfire57 Apr 6, 2014|$2,500|Ghost Writing|Completed| Job Details Looking for funny writers to format and finish a treatment and pilot episode for a sitcom based in the retail/fashion industry, set in Las Vegas. It's intended to be single camera doc/mock with some characters occasionally talking to the camera when they have a wisecrack to make. Intended for Network Broadcast.
I feel that it is the most promis...ing work I have at this time. I would like to see a fairly well polished treatment, and a pilot episode. My synopsis has a lot of very vivid character descriptions, and a lot of potential comedic situations to build upon. My synopsis is just over 3,200 words, and this is due in part to the extensive amount of potential "situations". I also have photos of what I think that the characters and settings should/could look like (in my mind), to help me communicate my vision.
The pilot episode should contain witty dialogue, and I am looking for a writer that does indeed have TV sitcom or other comedy writing experience.
It is my hope that the perfect writer will submit me a fine bid for this sitcom concept (please submit job bids rather than hourly bids), and it is my hope that the writer will find inspiration in my own writings so that together we may find success in this collaboration.
I did receive a number of good bids when I first posted, but I think that I may not have been specific enough in what I originally posted. So if you previously bid, please do try again with a clearer understanding of my more specific parameters. Skills: creative writing, ghostwriting, screenwriting, script writingView Full Job Description »Collapse Job Description »Feedback Comments: “If you were to look up the word PROFESSIONAL in the dictionary, it would say: "see Joe Vetromile". Joe is experienced, knowledgeable, and sticks to his timelines.” — tigerfire57 Client: tigerfire57 Apr 6, 2014|$2,500|Ghost Writing|Completed| Job Details Looking for funny writers to format and finish a treatment and pilot episode for a sitcom based in the retail/fashion industry, set in Las Vegas. It's intended to be single camera doc/mock with some characters occasionally talking to the camera when they have a wisecrack to make. Intended for Network Broadcast.
I feel that it is the most promis...ing work I have at this time. I would like to see a fairly well polished treatment, and a pilot episode. My synopsis has a lot of very vivid character descriptions, and a lot of potential comedic situations to build upon. My synopsis is just over 3,200 words, and this is due in part to the extensive amount of potential "situations". I also have photos of what I think that the characters and settings should/could look like (in my mind), to help me communicate my vision.
The pilot episode should contain witty dialogue, and I am looking for a writer that does indeed have TV sitcom or other comedy writing experience.
It is my hope that the perfect writer will submit me a fine bid for this sitcom concept (please submit job bids rather than hourly bids), and it is my hope that the writer will find inspiration in my own writings so that together we may find success in this collaboration.
I did receive a number of good bids when I first posted, but I think that I may not have been specific enough in what I originally posted. So if you previously bid, please do try again with a clearer understanding of my more specific parameters. Skills: creative writing, ghostwriting, screenwriting, script writingView Full Job Description »Collapse Job Description »Feedback Comments: “If you were to look up the word PROFESSIONAL in the dictionary, it would say: "see Joe Vetromile". Joe is experienced, knowledgeable, and sticks to his timelines.” — tigerfire57 hhhhClient: tigerfire57 Apr 6, 2014|$2,500|Ghost Writing|Completed| Job Details Looking for funny writers to format and finish a treatment and pilot episode for a sitcom based in the retail/fashion industry, set in Las Vegas. It's intended to be single camera doc/mock with some characters occasionally talking to the camera when they have a wisecrack to make. Intended for Network Broadcast.
I feel that it is the most promis...ing work I have at this time. I would like to see a fairly well polished treatment, and a pilot episode. My synopsis has a lot of very vivid character descriptions, and a lot of potential comedic situations to build upon. My synopsis is just over 3,200 words, and this is due in part to the extensive amount of potential "situations". I also have photos of what I think that the characters and settings should/could look like (in my mind), to help me communicate my vision.
The pilot episode should contain witty dialogue, and I am looking for a writer that does indeed have TV sitcom or other comedy writing experience.
It is my hope that the perfect writer will submit me a fine bid for this sitcom concept (please submit job bids rather than hourly bids), and it is my hope that the writer will find inspiration in my own writings so that together we may find success in this collaboration.
I did receive a number of good bids when I first posted, but I think that I may not have been specific enough in what I originally posted. So if you previously bid, please do try again with a clearer understanding of my more specific parameters. Skills: creative writing, ghostwriting, screenwriting, script writingView Full Job Description »Collapse Job Description »Feedback Comments: “If you were to look up the word PROFESSIONAL in the dictionary, it would say: "see Joe Vetromile". Joe is experienced, knowledgeable, and sticks to his timelines.” — tigerfire57
TREATMENT AND PILOT FOR TELEVISION
Client:
tigerfire57
Apr 6, 2014
Job Details
Looking for a treatment and pilot episode for a sitcom based in the retail/fashion industry, set in Las Vegas. It's intended to be single camera doc/mock with some characters occasionally talking to the camera when they have a wisecrack to make. Intended for Network Broadcast. I would like to see a fairly well polished treatment, and a pilot episode. My synopsis has a lot of very vivid character descriptions, and a lot of potential comedic situations to build upon. My synopsis is just over 3,200 words, and this is due in part to the extensive amount of potential "situations". I also have photos of what I think that the characters and settings should/could look like (in my mind), to help me communicate my vision.
The pilot episode should contain witty dialogue.
Feedback Comments:
“If you were to look up the word PROFESSIONAL in the dictionary, it would say: "see Joe Vetromile". Joe is experienced, knowledgeable, and sticks to his timelines.” — tigerfire57
QUERY LETTER/SYNOPSIS
Client:
brendandesigner Mar 21, 2014
Job Details
I need an exceptional query letter and synopsis to solicit a fictional manu script to agents. I will provide a draft synopsis which will help explain the project, identify the genere etc. Skills: content writing, creative writing, public relations, script writing, speech writing
Feedback Comments:
“joevertomile helped above and beyond. I ha\ighly recommend his services. Prompt, patient, knowledgable and generous oh his time. Communication was effortless as he has a terrific way to articulate what his intentions are. I'll look forward to using his serviced again several times.” — brendandesigner
NOVEL AND MOVIE SCRIPT
Client:
ikhaled
Mar 15, 2014
Job Details
An epic story from the Islamic history based on true story of Abdulraman the ruler of Andalucia ( Spain ) we need to add a new character to the story and re write to be a great animation movie, The story have a great meaning of culture melting and peace between religions and love between humanity.
We need the followings:
1- Add characters to t...he story.
2- Write the story as an official novel.
3- Turn the Novel into movie script.
Thanks and all the best.
Feedback Comments:
“I'm very pleased with the script. He did completed the work in the best way passable. I am very happy with the end result. Thank you for your help and your expertise, And for the great support after finishing the script. Thanks Joe. ” — ikhaled
NOVEL AND MOVIE SCRIPT
Client:
ikhaled
Mar 15, 2014
Job Details
An epic story from the Islamic history based on true story of Abdulraman the ruler of Andalucia ( Spain ) we need to add a new character to the story and re write to be a great animation movie, The story have a great meaning of culture melting and peace between religions and love between humanity.
We need the followings:
1- Add characters to t...he story.
2- Write the story as an official novel.
3- Turn the Novel into movie script.
Thanks and all the best.
Feedback Comments:
“I'm very pleased with the script. He did completed the work in the best way passable. I am very happy with the end result. Thank you for your help and your expertise, And for the great support after finishing the script. Thanks Joe. ” — ikhaled
SCREENPLAY ADAPTATION BASED ON A NOVEL
Client:
JeanneAZ
Feb 27, 2014
Job Details
I need help adapting my book into a screenplay. I'm a writer, but not a screenwriter, so I need someone with extensive formatting experience. I'm looking for a Christian who can relate to the challenges of 50-something mid-life romance and starting over. I believe this background is pertinent to the manuscript quality and a working relationship. ...The story is not a simplistic chick flick, but deeply addresses the issues and desires that Boomers face in finding love again. I already have a strong, solid contact in the movie production industry who will personally shop this for me once it is written. Secondarily, I am also seeking advice and wisdom on how to proceed with this project. I would graciously appreciate any suggestions.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe's work was exemplary, but my biggest praise is for his "extra mile" mentality. I appreciated his willingness to roll with my schedule and go far beyond what he was contracted to do. He mentored me in an area of writing where I had no experience while respecting creative guidelines and talent. He answered every question at length, challenged me to think outside the box, was tremendously encouraging, and helped me finish a project that represents and highlights my best writing to date. ” — JeanneAZ
SCREENPLAY REVISIONS
Client:
cleveland
Feb 24, 2014
Job Details
Hey Joe, I wrote a screenplay that I need revamped/revised by a screenwriter who is better than me, and knows what a good screenplay feels like, and looks like. The script is presently at 99 pages. If you have the time, and interest please let me know the cost and procedure. My goal is to market the script once I am confident that it is at marketable stage. I don't have a huge budget, but I will make the sacrifice if it is not too far above my head.
Let me know.
Cleveland
Feedback Comments:
“Absolute pleasure to work with Joe. He really is one of the best writers here on elance, and I say that as a fellow writer myself. He is also very considerate, understanding and patient. Highly recommended.” — Cleveland
SCREENPLAY REVISIONS
Client:
wingdiz
Feb 6, 2014
Job Details
Looking for a very successful produced screenwriter to write Act 2 content and rewrites where needed.
Feedback Comments:
“Once again, Joes Brilliance and Creativity is Simply Amazing. Know wonder he's the most sought after ghostwriter around.” — wingdiz
SCREENPLAY REWRITE
Client: curtis1978
Dec 11, 2013
Job Details
Hello I'm working with a few people and we are moving forward on a movie. I need someone who knows how to write a movie script.... I wrote it already but it needs to be more pro....and detailed its called the myth and it based on a legend that comes true. its a full length movie and its a thriller. I need someone to take a script that written and make it ten times better. use the idea and make it more scary and better.
Feedback Comments:
“I would use this ghostwriter again and again. The best i worked wit yet. Trusted good at what he does and has the answers when i need them and goes far beyond the project task.Thank you again i will be working with you soon.” — curtis1978
PITCH LETTER/QUERY/SYNOPSIS
Client: RichardLove
Nov 3, 2013
Job Details
Hi, Within fitness there has been and always will be a huge interest in transforming people's appearance. We have an idea we know will be unmatched. We need you who is experienced in this area to write a selling synopsis that we'll, after copyrighting it, contact right people in the industry to take further action!
Thanks in advance,
Feedback Comments:
“I am honored and extremely satisfied with the work Joe have provided for me. I had high expectations but Joe delivered something that took my brainstorming notes to a treatment ready for next step. Not only have Joe done a fantastic job but because of his experience and expertise within this field he have guided and coached me of the industry on what to do what not to do and what's the next step information I'd never be able to retrieve!! ” — RichardLove
QUERY LETTERS
Client:
crazydp
Oct 7, 2013
Job Details
I have a ghostwriting project that I'm looking for help with and you seemed a perfect fit. I have a finished coming of age fantasy novel that I'm looking for someone to read through it in order to first write two query letters "One formal, One casual or whimsical in relation to the story's material." Then secondly, an in depth story synopsis write in present tense required by industry standards. Three pages at most.
What I'm not looking for is an up sell for a complete copy edit of the manuscript. Yes I would be open to simple critiques or comments in regards to things I can fix myself. I have uploaded a sample to give you an idea of what the story entails.
Feedback Comments:
“ Joe's ghost writing for query letter or story synopsis is top notch. I look forward to working with him again on future projects. David ” — crazydp
NOVEL
Client:
wingdiz
Aug 28, 2013
Job Details
It's a Comedy based on the "Odd Couple" movie, with a modern day twist. City folks that have to move to the country.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is Incredibly amazing writer. He got my exact thoughts out of my brain, and put them down on paper. His story structure is "Astonishing". — wingdiz
PITCH/COMPLETE REWRITE ON THE REALITY SHOW
Client:
reginaldhathorn
Apr 26, 2013
Job Details
I have a reality show that I have already written a pitch for. I've let a TV professional make notes on it. My next step is to have someone further develop and write the pitch per his notes to be made a viable pitch to networks and producers.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe Vetromile was a great help. He is very knowledgeable about the subject matter, extremely creative, efficient, and he is also a great resource. I will definitely use him as a goto person.” — reginaldhathorn
BOOK - TRUE STORY
Client:
esunshine789
March 26, 2013
Job Details
My husband Peter escaped Communist Hungary and has an amazing story about this experience. We are looking for a honest, hardworking, reliable and last but not least a true wordsmith, that can ghostwrite this wonderful story.
Feedback Comments:
“We couldnt have used a better person to work on this project, Joe is EXTREMELY professional and he gave us his all! We are so overjoyed, he does what he says and follows through with his promises, a very committed and dedicated ghostwriter. ” — Client
SCREENPLAY REVISIONS
Client:
jmak357
March 4, 2013
Job Details:
Dear Joe Vetromile I am very impressed with your body of work. I have written a Drama Screenplay that is approximately 94 pages (Font size 11). I do own the copyright and it is registered with the West Coast Writers Guild. I do not consider myself a writer in any way shape or form, however I do possess a vivid imagination. So on my long commute t...o work I would think about ideas for a story, take notes and then incorporate it into my script. The difficulty that I am having is making the characters come to life and deliver the proper message to reader. I am hoping you can assist me with giving the script life as I envision it. I have also considered turning the story into a book and I am open any thoughts you may have and will give you the proper credit with the completed project.
The screenplay jumps from present day, 1980's and the early 1860's during the Civil War. The screenplay flashes back and forth similar to a Quentin Tarantino movie or the movie "Crash". I would love to send you a copy of a generic outline to see if this is something you would consider working on. If so I would gladly send you a copy of the screenplay.
Thanks for your time and consideration,
John Makropoulos
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is a true professional. Thanks for your expertise, feedback and completing the project in a timely manner. I recommend Joe to all writers.” — jmak357
BOOK - TRUE STORY
Client:
Voetsakbrent
Feb 7, 2013
Job Details
Hello I am looking for somebody to help me write a book on a true life story that took place with me some years ago. It revolves around a business deal that went wrong in China and i almost lost my life. I have written down everything that happened to me leading up to the event , before and after the event , to when my story was rejected... by the Australian Federal Police . I believe it has legs to turn it into something really special with the right Ghost writer on Board. The person that needs to apply needs to have a track record on any of its previous work . This information needs to be made public, as to what can happen to you if you don't do your homework before you take on a project.
Brenten van de Stadt
Feedback Comments:
“Hi Joe, Just want to thank you for the final draft of the book, Its Great, and has possible rewards to a follow up , i like that. i trust that we can take it to the next level via a publisher, can i leave that in your hands. Keep me Posted . Brent van de Stadt...Australia .” — Voetsakbrent
SCREENPLAY
Client:
Byrne_Entertainment
Nov 6, 2012
Job Details
I have written a true story called "Dolphins". I need to get this story moved over to Final Draft Pro as I am pitching this as a feature length movie. It is based on the 2002 Bali Terrorist Attack where 202 people were killed. Currently I have an outline and over 10,000 words that I need to get into Final Draft Pro. Final Draft Pro is the indus...try standard for Movie Scripts. I can allow you access to this via DropBox.
This is going to be a fairly large project as there are quite a few facts and details that need to be fine tuned and verified, I will need help with this. In addition there will be some back and forth as certain scenes are simply outlines with no dialogue. While there are other scenes that are completed. My ideal writing partner would be someone who is happy to work about 20 hours a week, so I have time to add the finer details to the project during the rest of the week. I am banking on about a month to six weeks to get this project finished.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe delivered. My script was completed on time, within budget. Unfortunately Joe could not guarantee my script would win an Academy Award, but with his help having a completed script, my chances are better then ever!!” — Client
SCREENPLAY
Client:
Byrne_Entertainment
Nov 6, 2012
Job Details
I have written a true story called "Dolphins". I need to get this story moved over to Final Draft Pro as I am pitching this as a feature length movie. It is based on the 2002 Bali Terrorist Attack where 202 people were killed. Currently I have an outline and over 10,000 words that I need to get into Final Draft Pro. Final Draft Pro is the indus...try standard for Movie Scripts. I can allow you access to this via DropBox.
This is going to be a fairly large project as there are quite a few facts and details that need to be fine tuned and verified, I will need help with this. In addition there will be some back and forth as certain scenes are simply outlines with no dialogue. While there are other scenes that are completed. My ideal writing partner would be someone who is happy to work about 20 hours a week, so I have time to add the finer details to the project during the rest of the week. I am banking on about a month to six weeks to get this project finished.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe delivered. My script was completed on time, within budget. Unfortunately Joe could not guarantee my script would win an Academy Award, but with his help having a completed script, my chances are better then ever!!” — Client
SCREENPLAY - HORROR
Client:
equipmentguy
Sep 4, 2012
Job Details
Needing a ghost writer on an 80 page thriller/horror script. We are funded and going into production in early October (2012). We received coverage notes and will be using those as a guide post to sharpen this script. Only apply if you can start on this project immediately, we are going into casting sessions within the month. Good with dialogue ...and able to push the thriller envelope are a must. Plus a passing knowledge of the play Macbeth is a plus
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is a great ghost writer who hit the budget and the time constraints on the nose. He is willing to roll with the punches and change direction if need be.” — equipmentguy
Client:
equipmentguy
Sep 4, 2012
Job Details
Needing a ghost writer on an 80 page thriller/horror script. We are funded and going into production in early October (2012). We received coverage notes and will be using those as a guide post to sharpen this script. Only apply if you can start on this project immediately, we are going into casting sessions within the month. Good with dialogue ...and able to push the thriller envelope are a must. Plus a passing knowledge of the play Macbeth is a plus
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is a great ghost writer who hit the budget and the time constraints on the nose. He is willing to roll with the punches and change direction if need be.” — equipmentguy
ASSISTANCE WITH FICTION NOVEL
Client:
dunipan
May 16, 2012
Job Details
Started working on a manuscript for a fiction novel. So far have completed 8 chapters and a prologue . At this stage I thought it would be a good place to stop and get some guidance since I am not a creative writer (normally).
Would like:
1) Someone to give me a honest opinion if this project is worth pursuing
2) Help me understand if the chapter and character constructs are engaging and on track for publication. What can I improve on? What am I missing doing?
3) Work with me to polish these chapters so I can see the full potential of the work done thus far. Editing/ proofreading etc.
The prologue + 8 chapters are about 17K words/ 64 pages. The book is a fast paced thriller with a plot as best I can tell, has never been done before. Has the potential to be a great script/ movie as well...at least I think so.
Feedback Comments:
“Simply put, Joe is fantastic. He is an industry veteran that offers great advice and knows how to push you to your potential. Writing a novel is an incredible journey and it is comforting to know that people like Joe exist to help you every step of the way. Whatever your writing requirements are get Joe on your side, you will not be disappointed. Thank you Joe for your honesty and setting me down the correct path to publication. ” — dunipan
Client:
dunipan
May 16, 2012
Job Details
Started working on a manuscript for a fiction novel. So far have completed 8 chapters and a prologue . At this stage I thought it would be a good place to stop and get some guidance since I am not a creative writer (normally).
Would like:
1) Someone to give me a honest opinion if this project is worth pursuing
2) Help me understand if the chapter and character constructs are engaging and on track for publication. What can I improve on? What am I missing doing?
3) Work with me to polish these chapters so I can see the full potential of the work done thus far. Editing/ proofreading etc.
The prologue + 8 chapters are about 17K words/ 64 pages. The book is a fast paced thriller with a plot as best I can tell, has never been done before. Has the potential to be a great script/ movie as well...at least I think so.
Feedback Comments:
“Simply put, Joe is fantastic. He is an industry veteran that offers great advice and knows how to push you to your potential. Writing a novel is an incredible journey and it is comforting to know that people like Joe exist to help you every step of the way. Whatever your writing requirements are get Joe on your side, you will not be disappointed. Thank you Joe for your honesty and setting me down the correct path to publication. ” — dunipan
SCREENPLAY
Client:
kheath
Dec 8, 2011
Job Details
I'm a ML baseball scout, in pro ball for 35 years. Quite an interesting story to tell. Possible non fiction book or movie script
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is good..Very professional and call tell a good story..Even let me vent without being offended..Good guy, great writer. really have enjoyed working with him... Kelly” — kheath
Client:
kheath
Dec 8, 2011
Job Details
I'm a ML baseball scout, in pro ball for 35 years. Quite an interesting story to tell. Possible non fiction book or movie script
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is good..Very professional and call tell a good story..Even let me vent without being offended..Good guy, great writer. really have enjoyed working with him... Kelly” — kheath
TELEVISION TREATMENT REVISED
Client:
jpb011466
Oct 31, 2011
Job Details
Need an existing television show treatment refined , expanded upon, and completed.
Feedback Comments:
“This is the second project I've worked with joe on and I am very pleased with his work!” — jpb011466
Client:
jpb011466
Oct 31, 2011
Job Details
Need an existing television show treatment refined , expanded upon, and completed.
Feedback Comments:
“This is the second project I've worked with joe on and I am very pleased with his work!” — jpb011466
SCREENPLAY ADAPTATION BASED ON A NOVEL
Client:
kiwinick
Sep 25, 2011
Job Details
I have written a 135,000-word thriller called "Due Diligence" and I would like to hire an experienced screen play writer to create a screen play of the novel. My literary agent in New York pitched the book to several prominent publishers, and the consistent feedback was along the lines of "good thriller but great movie"
Feedback Comments:
“I hired joevetromile to help me convert my 135,000 word thriller Due Diligence into a screenplay. We collaborated for more than seven months and he wrote five full versions of the screenplay, until we had the script in the shape we believed we needed. joevetromile is a hard worker who puts many hours into his projects, and his advice is always blunt and direct, which I found very helpful. I strongly recommend joevetromile for your screenplay, and I intend to collaborate with him again soon. ” — kiwinick
Client:
kiwinick
Sep 25, 2011
Job Details
I have written a 135,000-word thriller called "Due Diligence" and I would like to hire an experienced screen play writer to create a screen play of the novel. My literary agent in New York pitched the book to several prominent publishers, and the consistent feedback was along the lines of "good thriller but great movie"
Feedback Comments:
“I hired joevetromile to help me convert my 135,000 word thriller Due Diligence into a screenplay. We collaborated for more than seven months and he wrote five full versions of the screenplay, until we had the script in the shape we believed we needed. joevetromile is a hard worker who puts many hours into his projects, and his advice is always blunt and direct, which I found very helpful. I strongly recommend joevetromile for your screenplay, and I intend to collaborate with him again soon. ” — kiwinick
TREATMENT
Client:
jpb011466
Sep 10, 2011
Job Details
I have a concept for a unique reality Television show and have started a treatment to pitch to networks, but I need the treatment professionally completed.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe did a fantastic job of developing my treatment into a highly polished piece of work. I would like to work with him in the future on other projects I have in mind.” — jpb011466
Client:
jpb011466
Sep 10, 2011
Job Details
I have a concept for a unique reality Television show and have started a treatment to pitch to networks, but I need the treatment professionally completed.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe did a fantastic job of developing my treatment into a highly polished piece of work. I would like to work with him in the future on other projects I have in mind.” — jpb011466
TELEVISION PILOT SCREEPLAY
Client:
shortsalesd
Aug 4, 2011
Job Details
I have an amazing idea for a television pilot that I need transformed into a script. It is going to be an hour long tv pilot so it will need to be somewhere between 45-50 pages and I will also need a 1 page treatment. I need a writer that is creative and funny as this is going to be a comedy. This job will need to be completed within 45 days and th...e writer will not have any creative rights to the script or treatment. You will also have to sign a non disclose agreement prior to discussing the project in more detail. Please contact me for more details.
Thank you
Feedback Comments:
“Good writer and gave attention to details that I requested. Thank you for the great script. ” — shortsalesd
Client:
shortsalesd
Aug 4, 2011
Job Details
I have an amazing idea for a television pilot that I need transformed into a script. It is going to be an hour long tv pilot so it will need to be somewhere between 45-50 pages and I will also need a 1 page treatment. I need a writer that is creative and funny as this is going to be a comedy. This job will need to be completed within 45 days and th...e writer will not have any creative rights to the script or treatment. You will also have to sign a non disclose agreement prior to discussing the project in more detail. Please contact me for more details.
Thank you
Feedback Comments:
“Good writer and gave attention to details that I requested. Thank you for the great script. ” — shortsalesd
FICTON NOVEL AND SCREENPLAY
Client:
jamac
May 29, 2010
Job Details
I have started a book, partly fiction and partly non-fiction. I would also like a screenwriter after the book is finished. My book starts with me as a young child and the things that appear (aliens and spirit forms) through out my life and the places that they have taken me. I need a person who can take what I have and help me put in the right word...s, give ideas of their own and get motivated about it. It might take two books to finish my story if I find the right person willing to help. I have never wrote a book before so I will need guidance along the way. My husband who is an attorney is doing the copywriting process for me. The book will also need formatting, fixing grammar/spelling and editing along the way. If at all possible, I would like to have it finished with-in a month's time. Since I am new to this, I will do some research, but I would like to pay a fixed price. I would also pay extra for some illustrations. Thank you
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is great to work with! He has great suggestions and has helped me a great deal with the work that I wanted done.” — jamac
Client:
jamac
May 29, 2010
Job Details
I have started a book, partly fiction and partly non-fiction. I would also like a screenwriter after the book is finished. My book starts with me as a young child and the things that appear (aliens and spirit forms) through out my life and the places that they have taken me. I need a person who can take what I have and help me put in the right word...s, give ideas of their own and get motivated about it. It might take two books to finish my story if I find the right person willing to help. I have never wrote a book before so I will need guidance along the way. My husband who is an attorney is doing the copywriting process for me. The book will also need formatting, fixing grammar/spelling and editing along the way. If at all possible, I would like to have it finished with-in a month's time. Since I am new to this, I will do some research, but I would like to pay a fixed price. I would also pay extra for some illustrations. Thank you
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is great to work with! He has great suggestions and has helped me a great deal with the work that I wanted done.” — jamac
SELF-HELP-BOOK
Client:
mdolan
Jun 23, 2009
Job Details
I am looking to hire a ghost writer to help me finish the book I have started. It is a self help book and I have complied approximately 230 pages of material so far. I am looking for someone that can get a feel for the style I am writing and to help me expand on some of the content I wish to share and perhaps bring new ideas to the table. If intere...sted please submit a proposal. Thank you for taking the time to look at this project.
Feedback Comments:
“I truely enjoy working with joevetromile, I hope to work with him again and would recommend him to others. Very professional, excellent communication, just a great person to work with...” — mdolan
Client:
mdolan
Jun 23, 2009
Job Details
I am looking to hire a ghost writer to help me finish the book I have started. It is a self help book and I have complied approximately 230 pages of material so far. I am looking for someone that can get a feel for the style I am writing and to help me expand on some of the content I wish to share and perhaps bring new ideas to the table. If intere...sted please submit a proposal. Thank you for taking the time to look at this project.
Feedback Comments:
“I truely enjoy working with joevetromile, I hope to work with him again and would recommend him to others. Very professional, excellent communication, just a great person to work with...” — mdolan
SCREENPLAY - FICTION
Client:
vista2some
Mar 3, 2009
Job Details
Topic or description of what I need written: We need an experienced writer to create a fiction-based screenplay approximately 100+ pages.
What I already have versus what the provider will deliver: We have a detailed story outline with plot, characters, dialogue, events, etc. Provider to do some research and provide more dialogue to complete the project. Other context/requirements that providers will need to know: All rights to the screenplay will be ours. Specific expertise that I am seeking: Experience with screenplay writing. Timeframe for delivery: 3 months, but negotiable.
Feedback Comments:
“We are very pleased with the job Joe did for us writing a screenplay. He is very professional, has great ideas and his dialog is really good. He was very patient with "us amateurs" and walked us through every step of the way. He made us feel very comfortable with the whole process and came across as a very honest, sincere person. We would definitely use him again.” — vista2some
Client:
vista2some
Mar 3, 2009
Job Details
Topic or description of what I need written: We need an experienced writer to create a fiction-based screenplay approximately 100+ pages.
What I already have versus what the provider will deliver: We have a detailed story outline with plot, characters, dialogue, events, etc. Provider to do some research and provide more dialogue to complete the project. Other context/requirements that providers will need to know: All rights to the screenplay will be ours. Specific expertise that I am seeking: Experience with screenplay writing. Timeframe for delivery: 3 months, but negotiable.
Feedback Comments:
“We are very pleased with the job Joe did for us writing a screenplay. He is very professional, has great ideas and his dialog is really good. He was very patient with "us amateurs" and walked us through every step of the way. He made us feel very comfortable with the whole process and came across as a very honest, sincere person. We would definitely use him again.” — vista2some
MOVIE TREATMENT
Client:
ToddH99
Dec 8, 2008
Job Details
Screenplay -- scene by scene treatment.
Feedback Comments:
“Nice job. Taking a basic sketch for a film idea you did an excellent job breaking it down into a three act treatment as requested. Great communication and top notch writing ability. Thanks, Joe! ” — ToddH99
Client:
ToddH99
Dec 8, 2008
Job Details
Screenplay -- scene by scene treatment.
Feedback Comments:
“Nice job. Taking a basic sketch for a film idea you did an excellent job breaking it down into a three act treatment as requested. Great communication and top notch writing ability. Thanks, Joe! ” — ToddH99
MOVIE TREATMENT
Client:
ToddH99
Nov 24, 2008
Job Details
Rush job for one week turnaround on both existing projects
and this one.
Feedback Comments:
“As a repeat customer, my using Joe again shows I'm more than pleased with his work. Had a deadline on this and he accomplished the goal set on time (early actually). He hung in there through the give-and-take notes/revision process. Outcome is a professional piece of writing I can now market. Thanks again! ” — ToddH99
Client:
ToddH99
Nov 24, 2008
Job Details
Rush job for one week turnaround on both existing projects
and this one.
Feedback Comments:
“As a repeat customer, my using Joe again shows I'm more than pleased with his work. Had a deadline on this and he accomplished the goal set on time (early actually). He hung in there through the give-and-take notes/revision process. Outcome is a professional piece of writing I can now market. Thanks again! ” — ToddH99
ADAPTATION - SHORT FILM
Client:
ToddH99
Nov 14, 2008
Job Details
Adaptation of comic book script to screenplay format/short film.
Approximate length -- 25 pages.
Feedback Comments:
“Very professional. Took some basic ideas and brought a unique perspective and true talent to bear on them. A real pro writing job. Good communication. Excellent worker. A credit to Elance. We'll do more work again soon! ” — ToddH99
Client:
ToddH99
Nov 14, 2008
Job Details
Adaptation of comic book script to screenplay format/short film.
Approximate length -- 25 pages.
Feedback Comments:
“Very professional. Took some basic ideas and brought a unique perspective and true talent to bear on them. A real pro writing job. Good communication. Excellent worker. A credit to Elance. We'll do more work again soon! ” — ToddH99
NOVEL
Client:
creative18
Nov 3, 2008
Job Details
i need my story to be written into a novel. this is a story about the desperation to survive in the falling economy of jamaica. the story should be 250 pages 4 acts 9 divided sections or chapters.
i already have my plot theme detaied characters and the role they play in the story. also each setting and scene to the detail from the begining to the ...end. that includes whether the seen is narrated to get to the next scene or slowed down to create full effect. i know what i want to acomplish in every scene leading up to the climax.
what i need is someone gifted in putting words on paper. someone good at getting a topic and capturing the moment scene for scene until the story ends.
i will provide a documentary and movie so you can get a full idea of the type atmosphere that i am creating. and also some articles, a detail of each scene and chapter.
it wouldn't hurt if you already have knowledge or experience of jamaica or any area of poverty in or out of the west indies or united states but more important your style skills and knowledge on writing novels. it would also be a plus if you could give me advise on self publishing promoting and advertising. no need to be an expert but have experience in doing these things. I am flexible on the timeframe for quality work
Feedback Comments:
“This was the first time that i made an attempt at writing. let me say that joe was the perfect choice for me because of the way he structures a plan to get the perfect manuscript. he was able to work through all my mistakes and formed a polished draft. i will call on joe formy next project for sure.” — creative18
Client:
creative18
Nov 3, 2008
Job Details
i need my story to be written into a novel. this is a story about the desperation to survive in the falling economy of jamaica. the story should be 250 pages 4 acts 9 divided sections or chapters.
i already have my plot theme detaied characters and the role they play in the story. also each setting and scene to the detail from the begining to the ...end. that includes whether the seen is narrated to get to the next scene or slowed down to create full effect. i know what i want to acomplish in every scene leading up to the climax.
what i need is someone gifted in putting words on paper. someone good at getting a topic and capturing the moment scene for scene until the story ends.
i will provide a documentary and movie so you can get a full idea of the type atmosphere that i am creating. and also some articles, a detail of each scene and chapter.
it wouldn't hurt if you already have knowledge or experience of jamaica or any area of poverty in or out of the west indies or united states but more important your style skills and knowledge on writing novels. it would also be a plus if you could give me advise on self publishing promoting and advertising. no need to be an expert but have experience in doing these things. I am flexible on the timeframe for quality work
Feedback Comments:
“This was the first time that i made an attempt at writing. let me say that joe was the perfect choice for me because of the way he structures a plan to get the perfect manuscript. he was able to work through all my mistakes and formed a polished draft. i will call on joe formy next project for sure.” — creative18
NOVEL
Client:
studioscarab
Oct 7, 2008
Job Details
I'm currently searching for a ghost writer to work with on some ideas I have, that I would like turned into novel form. I am a professional sci-fi and fantasy illustrator (Lucasfilm, D&D, Lord of the Rings, Playstation), so I make my living with my imagination, but I have neither the time nor the skill set to properly write my stories in their pro...per long form and to develop the dialogue and other necessary character development. My stories are mostly sci-fi or modern/occult/gothic and are primarily in short synopsis form as 1-10 page treatments of general story arc. I am actively looking for the proper writer to work this on these types of projects, but would like a price range to write a novel, or a compendium of short stories. I am interested in writers with solid skills, proven track record, and preferably industry connections that may help with publication.
Feedback Comments:
“joe is a top notch writer, he is professional, timely, responsive and exceeded my expectations with working with the material he was given, and taking it to the next level. I will definetly work with joe again in the future.” — studioscarab
Client:
studioscarab
Oct 7, 2008
Job Details
I'm currently searching for a ghost writer to work with on some ideas I have, that I would like turned into novel form. I am a professional sci-fi and fantasy illustrator (Lucasfilm, D&D, Lord of the Rings, Playstation), so I make my living with my imagination, but I have neither the time nor the skill set to properly write my stories in their pro...per long form and to develop the dialogue and other necessary character development. My stories are mostly sci-fi or modern/occult/gothic and are primarily in short synopsis form as 1-10 page treatments of general story arc. I am actively looking for the proper writer to work this on these types of projects, but would like a price range to write a novel, or a compendium of short stories. I am interested in writers with solid skills, proven track record, and preferably industry connections that may help with publication.
Feedback Comments:
“joe is a top notch writer, he is professional, timely, responsive and exceeded my expectations with working with the material he was given, and taking it to the next level. I will definetly work with joe again in the future.” — studioscarab
BOOK
Client:
bellaheart
Aug 1, 2008
Job Details
I have composed an idea for a book or a screenplay. I am not sure which media is best. I have actually written several chapters, but I am sending you general idea of what I want. My writing is okay, but not great. Would like your opinion and how much would you charge for such a project. Thank-you.
Feedback Comments:
“He is everything he says he is- writer, mentor, upbeat, creative, professional...a real joy to work with! He works steady and with focused patience!” — bellaheart
Client:
bellaheart
Aug 1, 2008
Job Details
I have composed an idea for a book or a screenplay. I am not sure which media is best. I have actually written several chapters, but I am sending you general idea of what I want. My writing is okay, but not great. Would like your opinion and how much would you charge for such a project. Thank-you.
Feedback Comments:
“He is everything he says he is- writer, mentor, upbeat, creative, professional...a real joy to work with! He works steady and with focused patience!” — bellaheart
BOOK CRITIQUE
Client:
robertbeatty
Jan 8, 2008
Job Details
I have completed a 104,000 word narrative nonfiction story. This is a true story that combines the primary elements of a medical mystery and a character-overcomes-adversity inspirational story. It also includes elements of science, memoir, self-made men in America, and today's changing manufacturing/business world. That sounds like a lot, and it is..., but mostly it's a story about a tragedy that befalls a particular man and his family.
I am primarily looking for an overall analysis/critique on the manuscript and how to make it better. More specifically, here are some guidelines for what I need:
--I need an overall critique/analysis.
--I need analysis of the book's story line, structure, and pacing. I am particularly interested to know if certain chapters become boring or disrupt the story flow, or places where the story seems rushed and incomplete. In some cases I've tried to keep the pace moving pretty quickly. In other cases, I've taken a break to discuss the past or to touch on an area of science.
--I need some comments on the overall writing style, the use of POV, the diction, the level of personal-ness versus cold-objectivity, etc. Is the overall writing style working for the book?
--Because I am personally the narrator of the story as well as one of the main characters in the story, I need to be particularly careful about how I present myself. I definitely do not want to come across as arrogant or conceited. I want to come across as a heavily-involved observer who is concerned about the people around him and telling a story to the reader.
--Because there are many diverse elements in this story, I need to make sure that I have attained the write balance. It's a subjective decision, of course, as certain people will be more interested in certain elements, but I want to try to find the right balance of the elements I've listed above.
--Because I focused very hard to finish the manuscript, I'm having trouble evaluating the quality and effect of the ending (the last five or ten chapters). Have I provided the reader with a satisfactory conclusion? Does the ending have the right feeling of accomplishment and overcoming adversity?
Feedback Comments:
“Joe did a great job providing a critique of my book-length true story manuscript. He provided an overall assessment, a list of things to do to improve the story, and good practical tips on bringing it to the next level. I appreciated his advice, enjoyed working with him, and will do so again.” — robertbeatty
BOOK CRITIQUE
Client:
robertbeatty
Jan 8, 2008
Job Details
I have completed a 104,000 word narrative nonfiction story. This is a true story that combines the primary elements of a medical mystery and a character-overcomes-adversity inspirational story. It also includes elements of science, memoir, self-made men in America, and today's changing manufacturing/business world. That sounds like a lot, and it is..., but mostly it's a story about a tragedy that befalls a particular man and his family.
I am primarily looking for an overall analysis/critique on the manuscript and how to make it better. More specifically, here are some guidelines for what I need:
--I need an overall critique/analysis.
--I need analysis of the book's story line, structure, and pacing. I am particularly interested to know if certain chapters become boring or disrupt the story flow, or places where the story seems rushed and incomplete. In some cases I've tried to keep the pace moving pretty quickly. In other cases, I've taken a break to discuss the past or to touch on an area of science.
--I need some comments on the overall writing style, the use of POV, the diction, the level of personal-ness versus cold-objectivity, etc. Is the overall writing style working for the book?
--Because I am personally the narrator of the story as well as one of the main characters in the story, I need to be particularly careful about how I present myself. I definitely do not want to come across as arrogant or conceited. I want to come across as a heavily-involved observer who is concerned about the people around him and telling a story to the reader.
--Because there are many diverse elements in this story, I need to make sure that I have attained the write balance. It's a subjective decision, of course, as certain people will be more interested in certain elements, but I want to try to find the right balance of the elements I've listed above.
--Because I focused very hard to finish the manuscript, I'm having trouble evaluating the quality and effect of the ending (the last five or ten chapters). Have I provided the reader with a satisfactory conclusion? Does the ending have the right feeling of accomplishment and overcoming adversity?
Feedback Comments:
“Joe did a great job providing a critique of my book-length true story manuscript. He provided an overall assessment, a list of things to do to improve the story, and good practical tips on bringing it to the next level. I appreciated his advice, enjoyed working with him, and will do so again.” — robertbeatty
BOOK PROPOSAL
Client
amourchan
Nov 4, 2007
Job Details
Write Manuscript Publication Proposal to Publishers. Proposals' format is provided in the attached MS word document.
Feedback Comments:
“I am a repeat customer so that should tell you a lot especially having have work with him on previous book writing project. It has been a pleasure to work with him and will always seek him first for any of my future projects.” — amourchan
Client
amourchan
Nov 4, 2007
Job Details
Write Manuscript Publication Proposal to Publishers. Proposals' format is provided in the attached MS word document.
Feedback Comments:
“I am a repeat customer so that should tell you a lot especially having have work with him on previous book writing project. It has been a pleasure to work with him and will always seek him first for any of my future projects.” — amourchan
SELF-HELP BOOK PROPOSAL
Client:
bjjaeck
Sep 26, 2007
Job Details
I need assistance in writing a book proposal to package of self-help book to present to agents and/or publishers.
Feedback Comments:
“He did an excellent job on my project - both in terms of completing the task at hand but also in offering valued related advice along the way. If I have a need for a similar project I would surely hire him again.” — bjjaeck
Client:
bjjaeck
Sep 26, 2007
Job Details
I need assistance in writing a book proposal to package of self-help book to present to agents and/or publishers.
Feedback Comments:
“He did an excellent job on my project - both in terms of completing the task at hand but also in offering valued related advice along the way. If I have a need for a similar project I would surely hire him again.” — bjjaeck
BOOK LIFE STORY
Client:
amourchan
Aug 27, 2007
Job Details
I need a writer to help me write a book about my life story which is filled with tragedies, hope and dreams come true. I started learning English six years ago and have very little experience writing in English.
I am always invited to speak about my life experiences in schools, churches, community gatherings and many other places. I have had some... articles publish in local news papers as well as nation news papers and websites. People have always been asking me if I have written any book about my life but I have been very reluctant for many years because of the lack funds to finance this project. Even thought I still don't have the $30,000 or $50,000 budget right now I believe that a book about my life story would generate significant revenue. I want to work with someone who have commitment and passion for writing.
Thank you for reading.
Feedback Comments:
“I only had a 5 page bibliography and in less then three months he turned it into an amazing work that was above and beyond my expectations. No only did he followed directions but he also spent enormous extra time researching and gathering additional data about my subject matter. It was great joy working with him. I will always recommend him to my friends and for my future needs of a professional writer.” — amourchan
Client:
amourchan
Aug 27, 2007
Job Details
I need a writer to help me write a book about my life story which is filled with tragedies, hope and dreams come true. I started learning English six years ago and have very little experience writing in English.
I am always invited to speak about my life experiences in schools, churches, community gatherings and many other places. I have had some... articles publish in local news papers as well as nation news papers and websites. People have always been asking me if I have written any book about my life but I have been very reluctant for many years because of the lack funds to finance this project. Even thought I still don't have the $30,000 or $50,000 budget right now I believe that a book about my life story would generate significant revenue. I want to work with someone who have commitment and passion for writing.
Thank you for reading.
Feedback Comments:
“I only had a 5 page bibliography and in less then three months he turned it into an amazing work that was above and beyond my expectations. No only did he followed directions but he also spent enormous extra time researching and gathering additional data about my subject matter. It was great joy working with him. I will always recommend him to my friends and for my future needs of a professional writer.” — amourchan
SCRIPT COVERAGE
Client:
mybonbon
Aug 21, 2007
Job Details
I have finished my screenplay and now I need a professional reader to read and do the critique notes. I prefer someone with one of the top agencies in Hollywood to read and make script notes for me in order to get it ready to submit.
Please tell me what agency or agencies you have read for or are currently employed with.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe was everything expected and more. He was prompt with all messages. The finished Screenplay critique was right on the mark. He almost was able to read my mind and gave me some great advice and great ideas. He also is going to continue to help me by reading my next rewrite and also giving me a list of producers and other information to help me be successful. I was completely satisfied and would definitely use him again. Not only a professional in his field but obviously is compassionate and cares about other people.” — mybonbon
Client:
mybonbon
Aug 21, 2007
Job Details
I have finished my screenplay and now I need a professional reader to read and do the critique notes. I prefer someone with one of the top agencies in Hollywood to read and make script notes for me in order to get it ready to submit.
Please tell me what agency or agencies you have read for or are currently employed with.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe was everything expected and more. He was prompt with all messages. The finished Screenplay critique was right on the mark. He almost was able to read my mind and gave me some great advice and great ideas. He also is going to continue to help me by reading my next rewrite and also giving me a list of producers and other information to help me be successful. I was completely satisfied and would definitely use him again. Not only a professional in his field but obviously is compassionate and cares about other people.” — mybonbon
PITCH
Client:
mallah3
Aug 2, 2005
Job Details
I am a one person company that aspires to be a world-wide conglomerate. My holding company, CDB Holdings, Inc., has a subsidiary (Infinmedia) that I would like to produce movies, television/cable shows and write fictional books through. I currently have a tentative letter written for the purpose of trying to develop a co-production d...eal with the studios. I have a number of my movie/television ideas/concepts synopsi listed on it and just planned to mail it to a number of studios and execs.. Ultimately, I am probably looking for advice on trying to crack "the industry" and be at least noticed. Maybe a re-write by you of the letter is my initial move.
Feedback Comments:
“It was great working with Joe and I look forward to our business relationship continuing into the future.” — mallah3
Client:
mallah3
Aug 2, 2005
Job Details
I am a one person company that aspires to be a world-wide conglomerate. My holding company, CDB Holdings, Inc., has a subsidiary (Infinmedia) that I would like to produce movies, television/cable shows and write fictional books through. I currently have a tentative letter written for the purpose of trying to develop a co-production d...eal with the studios. I have a number of my movie/television ideas/concepts synopsi listed on it and just planned to mail it to a number of studios and execs.. Ultimately, I am probably looking for advice on trying to crack "the industry" and be at least noticed. Maybe a re-write by you of the letter is my initial move.
Feedback Comments:
“It was great working with Joe and I look forward to our business relationship continuing into the future.” — mallah3
COMPLETE BOOK/POLISH
Client:
Samaria
Mar 30, 2005
Job Details
I have been in the process of writing a memoir based on my experiences with a cult called the Family of Love, also known as The Family. This book includes sexual seduction by the group, prostituting in the name of Jesus, child molestation, how I became a member, and how I left. My recovery process is critical for those who have been in a cult. R...ecently this group made headlines when the leader's son committed murder of one of his sexual abusers and suicide.
The subject is highly controversial and I need someone who is not afraid of the subject matter.
I need someone to help me polish my work and complete this book as quickly as possible while the media attention is hot. I'm looking with someone with publishing skills as well. My budget is limited.
Feedback Comments:
“Words cannot express what a wonderful job Joe did for me. I am on a fixed income and could not afford to do all that I wanted with my book manuscript. Joe went beyond what was expected of him. He sacrificed his time and energy to help me. The work that he did was just unbelievable. He worked quickly and with great accuracy. I highly recommend Joe''s service. He is without a doubt a thorough professional. Sincerely, Billie Chainey” — Samaria
COMPLETE BOOK/POLISH
Client:
Samaria
Mar 30, 2005
Job Details
I have been in the process of writing a memoir based on my experiences with a cult called the Family of Love, also known as The Family. This book includes sexual seduction by the group, prostituting in the name of Jesus, child molestation, how I became a member, and how I left. My recovery process is critical for those who have been in a cult. R...ecently this group made headlines when the leader's son committed murder of one of his sexual abusers and suicide.
The subject is highly controversial and I need someone who is not afraid of the subject matter.
I need someone to help me polish my work and complete this book as quickly as possible while the media attention is hot. I'm looking with someone with publishing skills as well. My budget is limited.
Feedback Comments:
“Words cannot express what a wonderful job Joe did for me. I am on a fixed income and could not afford to do all that I wanted with my book manuscript. Joe went beyond what was expected of him. He sacrificed his time and energy to help me. The work that he did was just unbelievable. He worked quickly and with great accuracy. I highly recommend Joe''s service. He is without a doubt a thorough professional. Sincerely, Billie Chainey” — Samaria
CHILDREN'S BOOK REVISION
Client:
Preptaxi
Dec 15, 2004
Job Details
I have a children's book written more from a British perspective. I need to tweak it a bit, make it more American and kick it up a notch. The story has good bones already, but needs to be more than it is.
Feedback Comments
“Joe is dynamite to work with. He helped me take a good story and turn it into a really wonderful story. Great guy and I truly hope I''ll get a chance to meet him in person sometime. I''m going to use him to help write a screenplay that I have in outline form next year. Joe is a great choice.” — Preptaxi
Client:
Preptaxi
Dec 15, 2004
Job Details
I have a children's book written more from a British perspective. I need to tweak it a bit, make it more American and kick it up a notch. The story has good bones already, but needs to be more than it is.
Feedback Comments
“Joe is dynamite to work with. He helped me take a good story and turn it into a really wonderful story. Great guy and I truly hope I''ll get a chance to meet him in person sometime. I''m going to use him to help write a screenplay that I have in outline form next year. Joe is a great choice.” — Preptaxi
SCREENPLAY
Client:
Scifiguy
Nov 21, 2004
Job Details
I am looking for a writer with screenwriting credentials to ghostwrite (or to share credit if excited about the concept)a screenplay based on my ideas. The ideas are High Concept and range from adventure to fantasy... to romantic comedy with a fantasy twist.
I would like to be involved in creating the outline and providing input into the writing, if possible.
I have a budget up to $5,000.00. There is no rush in writing. I want something great. Who doesn't, huh?
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is the best. If you have a project that you care about and you want done right, hire Joe. I am very pleased with his work.” — Scifiguy
Client:
Scifiguy
Nov 21, 2004
Job Details
I am looking for a writer with screenwriting credentials to ghostwrite (or to share credit if excited about the concept)a screenplay based on my ideas. The ideas are High Concept and range from adventure to fantasy... to romantic comedy with a fantasy twist.
I would like to be involved in creating the outline and providing input into the writing, if possible.
I have a budget up to $5,000.00. There is no rush in writing. I want something great. Who doesn't, huh?
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is the best. If you have a project that you care about and you want done right, hire Joe. I am very pleased with his work.” — Scifiguy
BOOK
Client:
joltinjoe
Oct 11, 2004
Job Details
This book is about tips and skills to succeed in the "outside world". It is targeted for young adults when they first leave high school or college and go out in life on their own.
Book outline:
Write table of contents with humor
write stories for each topic
find a quote for each topic
find a cartoon for each topic
written for kids - 150 - 200... pages
Back side (upside down) of book is positive advice stories and feeling shared by parents, family and friends - about 50 pages
I have a large amount of references. I need a creative writer to assimulate the information in a simple, humorous but informative format.
Approximate budget allocated to the project is $7,500 but I need terms.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe did a great job! He took the time to absorb and understand the essence of what I was looking for and then wrote the material that targeted my reading audience. I had made a number of "changes in direction" but Joe patiently followed through on this project from beginning to end to ensure that I have received everything I was looking for. ” — joltinjoe
Client:
joltinjoe
Oct 11, 2004
Job Details
This book is about tips and skills to succeed in the "outside world". It is targeted for young adults when they first leave high school or college and go out in life on their own.
Book outline:
Write table of contents with humor
write stories for each topic
find a quote for each topic
find a cartoon for each topic
written for kids - 150 - 200... pages
Back side (upside down) of book is positive advice stories and feeling shared by parents, family and friends - about 50 pages
I have a large amount of references. I need a creative writer to assimulate the information in a simple, humorous but informative format.
Approximate budget allocated to the project is $7,500 but I need terms.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe did a great job! He took the time to absorb and understand the essence of what I was looking for and then wrote the material that targeted my reading audience. I had made a number of "changes in direction" but Joe patiently followed through on this project from beginning to end to ensure that I have received everything I was looking for. ” — joltinjoe
SCREENPLAY
Client:
40wall
Oct 11, 2004
Job Details
I have written a screen treatment and require a writer to bring forth a screen play.
Genre - a Romantic-Melodrama
Time Line- 1930(s) to 1961
Venue - Between NYC- Lower Manhattan and a Province
in Italy
Story Line- Based in part on a true story
A women's unknowing and the sometimes tragic results of the wanti...ng and desirous effect the need for her love has on challenging a man's bravado. Especially true in the most powerful of men, rendering a self-inflicted conflict of ineptitude against machismo. Moving him to sometimes tragic actions to recapture his bravado image in the eyes of the women he loves...
thus becoming more audacious and bring out more of his Machiavellian behavior.
Main Character- Italian Don whose actions have effected
not only his generation but the lives
of the next.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe Vetromile has made this experence one of the greatest and most exciting. He took our screen treatment and developed the story and characters beyond our own expectations. His creative instincts allowed him to get behind the story in such away that it became alive early on. As the story further developed he asked for comments and guided us through changes we added.He often gave of himself which allowed us to contribute and become part of the process. He in essence sharpened our skills. His creative skill levels were always at the top along with his professional advise. We enjoyed every minute of creative time with him. We wish to continue our relationship to the next level of our completed work.” — 40wall
Client:
40wall
Oct 11, 2004
Job Details
I have written a screen treatment and require a writer to bring forth a screen play.
Genre - a Romantic-Melodrama
Time Line- 1930(s) to 1961
Venue - Between NYC- Lower Manhattan and a Province
in Italy
Story Line- Based in part on a true story
A women's unknowing and the sometimes tragic results of the wanti...ng and desirous effect the need for her love has on challenging a man's bravado. Especially true in the most powerful of men, rendering a self-inflicted conflict of ineptitude against machismo. Moving him to sometimes tragic actions to recapture his bravado image in the eyes of the women he loves...
thus becoming more audacious and bring out more of his Machiavellian behavior.
Main Character- Italian Don whose actions have effected
not only his generation but the lives
of the next.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe Vetromile has made this experence one of the greatest and most exciting. He took our screen treatment and developed the story and characters beyond our own expectations. His creative instincts allowed him to get behind the story in such away that it became alive early on. As the story further developed he asked for comments and guided us through changes we added.He often gave of himself which allowed us to contribute and become part of the process. He in essence sharpened our skills. His creative skill levels were always at the top along with his professional advise. We enjoyed every minute of creative time with him. We wish to continue our relationship to the next level of our completed work.” — 40wall
SYNOPSIS/LOGLINE/PITCH/QUERY/TREATMENT
Client:
Keyser
Mar 29, 2004
Job Details I've completed two screenplays which I've been receiving great feedback on, and now I'm ready to step out but I need a super logline, a super pitch, a super synopsis -- marketing tools. I only want this service for one of the screenplays. If I'm pleased then I'll use that person for the second screenplay.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is truly the BEST at what he does. He knows exactly what the industry is looking for and he delivers tenfold. My only disappointment is that I didn''t find him much sooner in my career. Thanks, Joe” — Keyser
Client:
Keyser
Mar 29, 2004
Job Details I've completed two screenplays which I've been receiving great feedback on, and now I'm ready to step out but I need a super logline, a super pitch, a super synopsis -- marketing tools. I only want this service for one of the screenplays. If I'm pleased then I'll use that person for the second screenplay.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is truly the BEST at what he does. He knows exactly what the industry is looking for and he delivers tenfold. My only disappointment is that I didn''t find him much sooner in my career. Thanks, Joe” — Keyser
BOOK BASED ON A TRUE STORY
Client:
needawriter
Sep 6, 2003
Job Details
Need ghost writer for book! My budget is $10,000.00 but would like to have payments or terms.
Thanks, Jean
Feedback Comments:
“The best writer around! My book will make the "New York Best Sellers List," because of his writing abilities! If you want a perfect writer do like I did and hire Joe!” — needawriter
Client:
needawriter
Sep 6, 2003
Job Details
Need ghost writer for book! My budget is $10,000.00 but would like to have payments or terms.
Thanks, Jean
Feedback Comments:
“The best writer around! My book will make the "New York Best Sellers List," because of his writing abilities! If you want a perfect writer do like I did and hire Joe!” — needawriter
SCREENPLAY ADAPTATION
Client:
Mythspinner
Jun 22, 2003
Job Details
I have a 376 page fantasy novel which I need adapted to a television mini-series screenplay. At this time I do not require any additional services such as submission to agents or shopping to markets. If my current contact does not pan out I may then resubmit for a new bid on such services. I can supply the existing manuscript in whichever format is convenient for your needs, including e-mail, disk, or CD. A sample chapter may be viewed at [obscured] -windlands.com/excerpt.htm. You may claim screenwriting credit on the project.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe has taken what turned out to be a very complicated project and helped me produce a quality, professional script. His most stellar quality has to be patience, since I am new to this aspect of writing and have my own very solid ideas of how I wanted this to work. Joe is creative, professional, attentive to detail, and most importantly to me has shown a great deal of enthusiasm for this story. We are continuing to work to place this script, and I look forward to working with Joe on more projects. I would highly recommend him to anyone, especially if they are a novice.” — Mythspinner
Client:
Mythspinner
Jun 22, 2003
Job Details
I have a 376 page fantasy novel which I need adapted to a television mini-series screenplay. At this time I do not require any additional services such as submission to agents or shopping to markets. If my current contact does not pan out I may then resubmit for a new bid on such services. I can supply the existing manuscript in whichever format is convenient for your needs, including e-mail, disk, or CD. A sample chapter may be viewed at [obscured] -windlands.com/excerpt.htm. You may claim screenwriting credit on the project.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe has taken what turned out to be a very complicated project and helped me produce a quality, professional script. His most stellar quality has to be patience, since I am new to this aspect of writing and have my own very solid ideas of how I wanted this to work. Joe is creative, professional, attentive to detail, and most importantly to me has shown a great deal of enthusiasm for this story. We are continuing to work to place this script, and I look forward to working with Joe on more projects. I would highly recommend him to anyone, especially if they are a novice.” — Mythspinner
BOOK BASED ON A TRUE STORY
Client:
deidre2002
May 17, 2003
Job Details
I had a beautiful wedding. Only four years later I am fighting a divorce.
I am a God fearing Christian woman and I have given custody of my two boys to my husband.
My children are young (3 and 5 years)and I want them to know (when they are older)my story and the persecution I suffered at the hands of their father as I... tried to keep our family intact.
I would record a tape reliving the events summarizing my four year marriage and I would include letters and photos.
I would like this project to begin immediately and I would expect it to take 20 weeks if worked on full time.
Feedback Comments:
“My overall experience with Joe throughout the completion of my project (from start to finish) far exceeded my expectations. I cannot put into words the depth of gratitude and satisfaction I''d wish to express to summarize my experience with him.” — deidre2002
Client:
deidre2002
May 17, 2003
Job Details
I had a beautiful wedding. Only four years later I am fighting a divorce.
I am a God fearing Christian woman and I have given custody of my two boys to my husband.
My children are young (3 and 5 years)and I want them to know (when they are older)my story and the persecution I suffered at the hands of their father as I... tried to keep our family intact.
I would record a tape reliving the events summarizing my four year marriage and I would include letters and photos.
I would like this project to begin immediately and I would expect it to take 20 weeks if worked on full time.
Feedback Comments:
“My overall experience with Joe throughout the completion of my project (from start to finish) far exceeded my expectations. I cannot put into words the depth of gratitude and satisfaction I''d wish to express to summarize my experience with him.” — deidre2002
SCREENPLAY
Client:
MISCORP
Feb 13, 2003
Job Details
Hitting my mid life crisis I realized I had all the typical experiences of a boomer laced with the flavor of organized crime, my grandfather was in the mob. That led me to write a novel. On some occasions it has been mentioned that it would make a better screenplay.
I run a construction business fulltime, and have three daughters. I am not sure that I have the time to learn about writing screenplays and then produce a screenplay worthy of my experiences and my family.
As such I am looking for someone to join my team. Someone who can read my novel, see the screenplay hidden within it, extract it from the story, get it on paper and to the industry for consideration.
I am passionate about this project, as you might imagine. If the winning bidder has not only talent but the experience and connections for a successful sale of the screenplay I would be prepared to pay a commission for that work also.
Imagine being a paperboy delivering the local paper full of stories pinning murders on your grandfathers friends. Chums talking about the headlines, while you must tow the line that the paper was full of lies. Imagine your two years old in a high chair hearing that gorillas were in town to collect money, all the time the Dick Van Dyke show is running and your identifying with little Richie. Laced in the novel is one families history with organized crime surrounding it.
Feedback Comments:
“My project is based on the story of my family. When dealing with something so personal, only a true professional can handle the novice that comes forward with a project. I found that professional with this provider. When exploring the limits of my ability to tell my story this provider would find ways to get the story out of me. When my strong feelings about the story would make me demanding this provider would exhibit the height of professionalism with patience and understanding. If you are a novice in need of help, or an experienced writer in need of a fresh take I am sure you will find that this provider will meet your needs.” — MISCORP
SCREENPLAY
Client:
MISCORP
Feb 13, 2003
Job Details
Hitting my mid life crisis I realized I had all the typical experiences of a boomer laced with the flavor of organized crime, my grandfather was in the mob. That led me to write a novel. On some occasions it has been mentioned that it would make a better screenplay.
I run a construction business fulltime, and have three daughters. I am not sure that I have the time to learn about writing screenplays and then produce a screenplay worthy of my experiences and my family.
As such I am looking for someone to join my team. Someone who can read my novel, see the screenplay hidden within it, extract it from the story, get it on paper and to the industry for consideration.
I am passionate about this project, as you might imagine. If the winning bidder has not only talent but the experience and connections for a successful sale of the screenplay I would be prepared to pay a commission for that work also.
Imagine being a paperboy delivering the local paper full of stories pinning murders on your grandfathers friends. Chums talking about the headlines, while you must tow the line that the paper was full of lies. Imagine your two years old in a high chair hearing that gorillas were in town to collect money, all the time the Dick Van Dyke show is running and your identifying with little Richie. Laced in the novel is one families history with organized crime surrounding it.
Feedback Comments:
“My project is based on the story of my family. When dealing with something so personal, only a true professional can handle the novice that comes forward with a project. I found that professional with this provider. When exploring the limits of my ability to tell my story this provider would find ways to get the story out of me. When my strong feelings about the story would make me demanding this provider would exhibit the height of professionalism with patience and understanding. If you are a novice in need of help, or an experienced writer in need of a fresh take I am sure you will find that this provider will meet your needs.” — MISCORP
BOOK
Client:
ELENA48
Oct 29, 2002
Job Details
I WROTE A SCREENPLAY THAT PLACED SEMIFINAL IN 2 MAJOR CONTESTS.
2 PUBLISHERS ARE INTERESTED IN A BOOK PROPOSAL.
I WROTE 3 CHAPTERS, TREATMENTS, SYNOPSIS, STEPO UTLINES AND LOG LINES. I WORK FULL TIME IN A DEALERSHIP.
PLEASE CONTACT ME
Feedback Comments:
“Joe has been able to read into my mind and my emotions. he is talented, meticulous and quick. We are still continuing more works in progress.” — ELENA48
Client:
ELENA48
Oct 29, 2002
Job Details
I WROTE A SCREENPLAY THAT PLACED SEMIFINAL IN 2 MAJOR CONTESTS.
2 PUBLISHERS ARE INTERESTED IN A BOOK PROPOSAL.
I WROTE 3 CHAPTERS, TREATMENTS, SYNOPSIS, STEPO UTLINES AND LOG LINES. I WORK FULL TIME IN A DEALERSHIP.
PLEASE CONTACT ME
Feedback Comments:
“Joe has been able to read into my mind and my emotions. he is talented, meticulous and quick. We are still continuing more works in progress.” — ELENA48
CHAPTERS AND BOOK PROPOSAL
Client:
ArcStudio
Aug 14, 2002
Job Details
I want 3 chapters of ghost writing AND a book proposal that will grab attention. I want this done right, therefore I only want bidders who have experience getting book proposals converted into contracts. The more contacts you have the better.
You will receive a rough, basic outline of the story and the rest is up to the writer. After receiving interest from a publisher I will negotiate ghost writing of the rest of the novel.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is a great guy, very fast and professional. He deserves all the business he gets. Without a doubt I would recommend him, in fact I would give him 10-stars. Keith” — ArcStudio
Client:
ArcStudio
Aug 14, 2002
Job Details
I want 3 chapters of ghost writing AND a book proposal that will grab attention. I want this done right, therefore I only want bidders who have experience getting book proposals converted into contracts. The more contacts you have the better.
You will receive a rough, basic outline of the story and the rest is up to the writer. After receiving interest from a publisher I will negotiate ghost writing of the rest of the novel.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe is a great guy, very fast and professional. He deserves all the business he gets. Without a doubt I would recommend him, in fact I would give him 10-stars. Keith” — ArcStudio
SCREENPLAY BASED ON A TRUE STORY
Client:
CatherineVineyard
Aug 11, 2002
Job Details
I am an amateur writer. I need a professional Scriptwriter who can develop a true life story into marketable script for the secular American TV/Video & Screen market. It is a family drama category. Anyone who is interested has to complete the work latest by mid June 2002.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe did an excellent job, far exceeding my expectations. He delivers a truly professional quality work. He is also reliable, staying in constant communication with me throughout the entire project. Great attitude and outstanding customer service. I will definitely use him again and highly recommend him for your project needs. Keep up the good work, Joe!” — CatherineVineyard
Client:
CatherineVineyard
Aug 11, 2002
Job Details
I am an amateur writer. I need a professional Scriptwriter who can develop a true life story into marketable script for the secular American TV/Video & Screen market. It is a family drama category. Anyone who is interested has to complete the work latest by mid June 2002.
Feedback Comments:
“Joe did an excellent job, far exceeding my expectations. He delivers a truly professional quality work. He is also reliable, staying in constant communication with me throughout the entire project. Great attitude and outstanding customer service. I will definitely use him again and highly recommend him for your project needs. Keep up the good work, Joe!” — CatherineVineyard
SCREENPLAY EDITS
Client:
Mr.Erickson J
un 5, 2002
Job Details
I have written multiple screenplays of which I hope to edit and put into industry format to market.
Feedback Comments:
“Joevetromile is the man!! Joe completed all of my projects ahead of schedule, at the right price, and with a level of professionalism to be marveled at. Thanks Joe for your continual help and support in my new career. ” — Mr.Erickson
Client:
Mr.Erickson J
un 5, 2002
Job Details
I have written multiple screenplays of which I hope to edit and put into industry format to market.
Feedback Comments:
“Joevetromile is the man!! Joe completed all of my projects ahead of schedule, at the right price, and with a level of professionalism to be marveled at. Thanks Joe for your continual help and support in my new career. ” — Mr.Erickson
HOW TO BOOK
Client:
mj9821
Apr 12, 2002
Job Details
I need a "guide" written up that explains blackjack in very in-depth detail. A .doc format would be fine, but I need something rather lengthy, even as high as 50 pages, with the overall explanation of the game, rules, strategies, etc...
This has to be original content, and I need proof of this as well, along with all rights to the product signed over..
I will probably make some modifications to the file as well...
Thanks in advance
Feedback Comments:
“Joe Vetromile could not have been more helpful. The entire time, he worked hard to make sure I was happy, and completed the project very much ahead of schedule. His work is very professional and he''s an absolute delight to work with. I would use him 100 more times and would recommend him to others. He''s an absolute A+++, you'd be hard pressed to find other people who work as hard to completion as he does.” — Client
Client:
mj9821
Apr 12, 2002
Job Details
I need a "guide" written up that explains blackjack in very in-depth detail. A .doc format would be fine, but I need something rather lengthy, even as high as 50 pages, with the overall explanation of the game, rules, strategies, etc...
This has to be original content, and I need proof of this as well, along with all rights to the product signed over..
I will probably make some modifications to the file as well...
Thanks in advance
Feedback Comments:
“Joe Vetromile could not have been more helpful. The entire time, he worked hard to make sure I was happy, and completed the project very much ahead of schedule. His work is very professional and he''s an absolute delight to work with. I would use him 100 more times and would recommend him to others. He''s an absolute A+++, you'd be hard pressed to find other people who work as hard to completion as he does.” — Client
